Eclipse
Alone with strangers, I
melt into gravel. Their boots
make a satisfying crunch
as they grind me down into earth.
Plastered in vinyl, we
peel persimmons and
black out the sun with
fistfuls of ash
as the train screams and
cheap bourbon consecrates
the tracks. Twinkling shards
of glass catch the moonlight
as pain radiates through the
nerves in my teeth. Air seeps
from the hole in my lungs:
I begin to vibrate
on a new frequency
I am radiant as mud in the
sharp hours of the morning,
slick and slippery as an eel.
Tell me what you
want from me; or don’t.
Let me move through you
and in you until I am reborn
in your image; squishy bits
of rusted blood and pulverized
bone poured out into a new skin,
baby soft and latex free.
The imagery is epic and the words do a great job of painting a vivid picture of the setting
I liked the imagery of this piece as well! It paints a beautiful picture and is very nostalgic in a sense.
The imagery works for me … it’s good